This is a realyl good fic! DEfinitely in-character for Kyra. Personally, I don't think you were supposed to think she just went for his story in the book. Faved! :D

This is good. I love the book, and you've got Kyra well characterized. I think the last two sentences are a little repetitive: "She kept telling herself..." "That was what she told herself." Other than that, fantastic!

Rae

short, but really captivating :) I liked it. you interpreted kyra really well. good writing, write more oneshots like this!

xox Sacha

i loved the book 'the astionishing adventues of fanboy and goth girl' and i think this is pretty good.

Really really good.

goth girl is in denial! this is kinda short update!

very well written