 crazygurf123 2009-12-26 . chapter 22 I really love this story I hope you update soon I want them tobe happy together |
 stevielicous 2009-12-13 . chapter 22aw :D |
 Tornado of Turmoil 2009-11-07 . chapter 4Me again! But I never get tired of this story, even though it's not finished :D the first few chapters are my favourite, they're so detailed and lovely XD |
 Tornado of Turmoil 2009-10-30 . chapter 13Hey, just dropping (yeah, another) a review to tell you I wrote that one shot! It's not great but I wouldn't have written it without you telling me to, so thanks... I'm addicted to this fic, seriously xD update soon hey? ;) |
 Tornado of Turmoil 2009-10-30 . chapter 21Just wanted to leave another comment as I read the story through again and was pleased you replied =D
The grammar mistakes don't take away much from the reading, so don't worry ^^ I was even inspired to write a Lizzie/Isabella fic of my own, but only managed 50% as I had problems with plot, despite it being only a one shot :/ Shame, I really wanted to post it.
Still, just wanted to say thanks for replying to my comment, because lots of writers don't do that :D this fic should have more reviewers, but this is a pretty tough section of FFN to get fans for =) |
 Tornado of Turmoil 2009-10-29 . chapter 22This story is brilliant! I read it all in one go... Remember punctuation when doing direct speech though =)
Like this:
“I remember that” I glanced at him in surprise.
“you seemed different already” he started again, his eyes slipping to my face guiltily
Ought to be
“I remember that.” I glanced at him in surprise.
“You seemed different already,” he started again, his eyes slipping to my face guiltily.
Still really good though! |
 I'm hopeless 2009-10-29 . chapter 22this story is awesome
i love how she just told gordo everything and confided in him
keep writing:) |
 Vanilla Slash 2009-10-27 . chapter 22O la la! I need to pay attention better or I wouldn't have noticed this fabulous new chapter at all! They are a bit short, but on the plus they always come out really cute! Gordo's acceptence was really mature--not too like the series as you pointed out in replying to my review (which was sweet of you to take the time ^^). I can't picture Meranda being as cool about it for some reason, though you might have another take on it. In any case, again, glad you're feeling better, and just as glad you're getting the support you need to write this! Great job! |
 Silent Fate 2009-10-14 . chapter 22AHH! Thank goodness you updated! I was going through withdrawals without an update from my favorite drug/addiction/fiction. I loved this chapter. It proves that Gordo really is a true friend. It's good that Lizzie finally got a full nights sleep now that she's finally told someone about her situation and gotten that weight off her chest. Now all she has to do to make herself feel 100% better is...(Drumroll please)...Go back to Rome! Haha, I'm excited to see where this fic is going. I'm so addicted, it's almost unhealthy. I kindly ask (and slightly demand...) that you update SOON! Very, very soon. :D |
 Music and Reading Lover 2009-10-14 . chapter 22I loved it! Please update soon |
 ultrawoman00 2009-10-14 . chapter 22Hey, this was an awesome chapter. I agree with the person before me about Gordo going up a notch. I was looking at my favorite stories to pick out something to re-read and I realized that I have another one of your stories in my favs list. A Liley Love Story. They're my fav pairing and you did that one great also... just to let you know. Can't wait for another chapter!! Thanks!! |
 Stupid-Lollies 2009-10-14 . chapter 22I think it's a great thank you! I'd take these thank yous any day! I'm glad that you didn't hate this chapter, because I certainly didn't. I thought it was very sweet with all the things Lizzie remembers about Isabella and how it made her feel and everything I also thought that Gordo just went up in my books. Good ol' Gordo ^-^.
Great chapter, never doubt it! I'm warning you! Lol ttfn! |
 Vanilla Slash 2009-10-10 . chapter 21This fic is quite honestly brilliant. ^-^ I always wondered abnout Lizzie and Isabella's relationship, and not only does the plot get into that and more, but your writing style is excellent. I'm really interested in how Gordo might react here, since in the series he had an obvious personal stake in Lizzie's love life and all that! ^o- I hope you're feeling a little more cheerful, since in your AN you mentioned a bit of a "down" time. 8) You've really got a bunch of people interested in this pairing that isn't really writen about often, but a great one all the same. Brilliant stuff! |
 stuck-on-air 2009-10-09 . chapter 21Love it! Please write more soon! The grammar errors aren't that distracting, and I love the story so far! This chapter does seem out of sync with the others, however, its still really good. I can't wait to read more! |
 Silent Fate 2009-10-06 . chapter 21I just read this all in about a day, and you must be mixing drugs into your writing because I am totally and completely ADDICTED. Every chapter had me glued to the screen, and every word completely captivated my attention. I mean it quite literally when I say that I nearly cried when I got to the last chapter because I wanted more! Your writing style is easy to read and flows very nicely. I hope you release a new chapter soon because I'm dying to know what happens next. I'm especially looking forward to when Lizzie finally makes her trip to Rome to win back the heart of Isabella! Anyway, to end this horrible excuse for a review, I'd just like to say, keep going, and update soon! |