YES PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER. were yuki and susumu arent realy married. i cried at the end for soujiro it was so sad. plus susumu sounds so weak he doesnt desereve someone like yuki

hi! i do love your story...

can you make another chappie..please!

i want a happy ending for them... :(

can you just make yuki asked help from susumu? and they arent really married..please please

maybe you can continue the story so that Soujiro and Yuki can be together. it kinda weird for Yuki to be with Susumu, and a really sad ending for Soujiro, although it kinda serve him right for not realising Yuki earlier

WAH write more! Get Soujirouh and Yuki together. Or better yet, write another one!

That was really nice. You should write more stories at 2 in the morning. LOL. Keep it up!

Nice. I know it's a complete 1-shot, but I hope you'd consider a part 2 -- make it a 2-shot?

I'm in an angsty-mood right now, maybe the second part would be a reality of what he hoped would not happen in this passage...

"That time will come, without a doubt, and when it does, he hopes she’ll be there. He hopes he won’t be too late."

Very nice one shot. He seemed so jaded considering he's only in his early twenties? Thank goodness I'm not one of those rich, goodlooking young people (like the F4) leading very charmed lives! :o)

Good job.