great story continue!

Hee hee! This is hilarious! I love the 'Thriller' part, the crazy Cid ranting, and the Hein bashing. Totally hilarious! Keep up the good work!

*Jeniveela*

THIS IS SOOOO CRAZY! You're a genious! I loved it! I WANT MORE! I just don't excuse you for hitting Gray... LOL

I loved the COCA and the music following Aki... and the wish I have to KILL HER when I finished reading! DAMMIT! She look very snobbish... Jesus...

keep going!

Dreamy Sorceress

I can't explain how funny that was. I loved the "Thriller" part. Hoped you could make it longer.

Why do you think Hein fans would be upset if you bashed him? I think it's fun! Besides, poor Gray is getting it worse... I love how this is going. Bwah ha ha!

Heh heh. This is how the movie should have gone in the first place.

This has to be best parody I've read. Period. Seriously, it kicks the crap out of the competition.

*ROFLMAO*

I was WAITING for this to be updated _ I love how EVERYONE is SO OOC! ::grins evilly:: It's perfect... I like Hein _

I like Sephi...

They were made for each other. _

Despite the tons of Hein bashing (in which I think he's adorable-but I don't blame you for bashing him... he is a bashable character), this fic is going well _ I'm totally LMAO especially at the COCA _

More please _

Nix

lol krazee! ;

*snicker* You've done it again... I loved the COCA! And the briefing where they were talking about Aki's... features... And, well, everything's good. But when did you go back to calling them Deep Eyes? I thought they were the Shallow Teeth? And one last thing: Auron's MINE!

*grins* Heh heh. Hein is a psycho freak. _ And judging from his behaviour with the book in this chapter (and the little letter in the first one,) Elliot's a bit of a pervert. Just the way we like 'em, eh? _-

And the Cid CrossOver attack was hilarious... but... but what about Cid 5? Oh, wait, he didn't do anything anyway, and Cid 4 was basically a censored version of Cid Highwind (although he's probably worth mentioning just to make fun of his surname. Pollendina? Wha? O_o) Never mind. *eg*

LOL! This is classic! I loved the subtle -and not-so-subtle- FF game references ("These recon jobs are the pits!" and Cloud being the sixth spirit)... can't wait to see what you do with the rest of the movie.

this is THE fic. write on. _

I can't remember the last time I read something that made laugh this much. .