Wonderful story! Thanks for sharing:)

"Mr. Cullen, keep your lips to yourself" lol lol lol

"The deep burning in my throat was growing, I noticed" I realize Alice can't see Bella but they do know what's going on with her. I think the Cullens are being irresponsible not keeping track of her! Of course it doesn't help that Bella is full of denial!

Angela either knows or suspects something

I suspect the Cullens will get slightly irritated at some point about time changing all the time::))

"I leaned forward and subconsciously crouched, ready to spring on my prey" Please tell me Stalkward is in the bushes!

No, guess Esme was there but being quiet! The Cullens are the weirdest 'people'::))

lol The Cullens (minus Esme it seems) watching Bella sleep is hysterical::))

This fic should really be marked Humor! Hysterical:)

I suspect Bella drinks blood

"Alice was smiling and she waved" lol lol lol that's so funny! The whole parking lot is frozen still, Bella's moving frozen people around & Alice waves:::)))

"That was the oddest experience ever…" lol lol I can imagine it would since Bella knows what they are but they don't know she knows::)) She actually knows a lot about vampires.

"To my surprise, I smiled back! That wasn't part of the plan!" lol lol lol Bella's an odd duck:) I think she'll be an interesting character!

With how expanded & complicated vampire brains are, no doubt they knew what happened just not how!

wow love this story rock on

This is a wonderful story and is well written! I got caught up in the story!

(Last line) awwwwwww

Great book please write a sequal

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