O.O so suspenseful! ily this- keep it up, can't wait for da next chapter ;)

oh snap did you just kill alice? no plz dont

She's bleeding? this can't be happening...

anyway, Kaiba sounds so sexy when he's trying to flirt (I would personnally find it a tiny bit creepy though)

please post soon though, they have to get out of the elevator!

Yay! Updated! Great job, but alice! AH! STAY Alive!

Oh wow... that was... great! I really do love this story! Please update soon!

Are you still alive? where is the update?

hahaha aww this is so cute. i love mokuba. fun fact - i have a pomeranian named Mokuba cause he's all black :] but we call him momo.

anyways, i like it. i love the build up and how you can paint a picture. CHAPTER 13 NOW!

matchmaker Mokuba! though if Amy sees an opportunity, she might tell Alice won't she? :p

anyway, I hope your pinkie is okay, it sounds like it hurts (I've never dislocated anything, so I wouldn't know...)

you dislocated your WHAT! are you OK! anyway, awesome- mokuba can be so funny sometimes lol, its a very good chapter (awesome italian, now i just have to go on bable fish lol!)

anyway thanks againa and i loved the chapter (i already have a some ideas for my story...)

monkey

good chapter as always..i'm sorry for your pinkie. haha

hey new reader here! I am completely in love with this story! I love Seto and Alice together, they just make the perfect couple! so is Mokuba going to play matchmaker now that he's met Alice?

once again, this is a great story, and I'll definently read more!

wow- keep going! I'm gonna have to add you to my list of faves (you awesome!)your actually the first on the list (only signed up yesterday!)

this was probably the best chapter yet... D

WANT MOAR STORY NOW! O.O

i think im slightly addicted.

i love it :) very good job! I might drop you a PM or something :D

good...(but a few spelling misses! or maybe i'm just not looking properly lol)

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