Good story. Thanks for taking time from your busy schedule to update.

i hope your not having writers block. i am enjoying your story and anxiously awaiting the next installment.
i wish i could give you a better critique, but i can't pin down anything that i think needs changed. i just know that you hooked me and i will be extremely frustrated if for some reason you can't finish the story.
thank you for taking time to write the story.

what happens next?

Wow! I thought Blair was history... I' glad Jim didn't hurt him again. Now what? *curious*

alright, quit torturing the readers already! its been over a week since chap 5came out. some of us do NOT do suspense well. it is cruel to leave us hanging. please don't tell me you have writers block! alright, having a life other than fan fic might be understandable, but if your not goiing to finish could you say so and put me out of my anxious misery. please! sorry , occasionally i just have to rant about unfinished stories. they frustrate the Hades out of me. one day i'll learn to only go to the completed stories instead of all. again sorry for the rant ,but please finish i'm hooked

you are EVIL! I just discovered this story via google and it is great. I mean my heart was racing at one point. you really had me going. I don't take this personally, but i hate you for leaving us at the cliff end. thanks and i just read a fortune cookie that said if you update real soon, you MAY win the lottery. so update real soon, just saying.

OMG! Poor Blair that's going to leave a mark. More Please, great story!

No...come back and write another chapter! You'll make me angry...you won't like me when I'm angry :P

OMG! What a place to end! I totally understand tho, why the updates are a little slow~my classes are kicking my butt too!
Especially since when I should be studying I am reading these stories instead, telling myself "Just one more". Your stories are WAY more interesting than Biology!
This is one GREAT story tho, and thank you for writing!
Barbie

Are you kidding? This is amazing!! Well, now you REALLY have to update ASAP.

Wow, great story so far! Cant wait to see the rest! If I promise FAITHFULLY to read and review will you continue?
Looking forward to ya!
Barbie

This was great. I am only sad there wasn't more available to read. I like your style or writing, its clear and understandable. Don't change anything just continue with your line of thought and I hope there will be more to read in the near future.

Hmm, you've got a good one going and I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with it. It is a tumor? A sound that is outside of normal frequencies? A little evil panther demanding attention? Look forward to seeing you finish it. Thanks for writing.

Toshua

Nice story. It has me thinking, which is always a good thing. Looking forward to the next installment. Thank you for sharing your talent.

Still solid writing. Story seems to be progressing nicely.