This is a very interesting story. I also enjoy the background and new characters you introduced, and am looking forward to the next book.

Very well written. Its very evident you put a lot of thought and effort into this and it shows in your writing. I'm sorry its taken so long for me to read it, but I have been busy with college entrance crap. It is an enjoying read, and I look forward to additions in the future. Not only is it an entertaining read, it is an educating read on the culture and ilfe of the world of Final Fantasy II. Keep up the good work.

Great job with this story, I'm one of those people who spell "magic". Yeah Ultima was originally a white magic in the original FF2. I need to get the PSP version.