good story loved how you at least keep it believeable. YAY LEMONS! :)

pritty cool keep it up.

great story so far

ya ya ya BUT WHAT IS THE SEQUAL CALLED!
must find out

nice the only way that could have been better if someone ** them selvs in fear i cant w8 2 see where this is going

man at this rate he is going 2 have like 10 wives or something...
(idea when he tells some one this they say 10 wives how dose that work and he seas very very well ;P)

lol if only they knew ;P
man i wonder what happens next

wow that was a nice ending and awesome fight (loved the slight zabuza hero worship)
also... ow seriously man what is with all the groin shot (okay only 2 but they where gruesome "Kisame's shredded and sai's blown off)

say what ?
then where is zabuza and haku ?
(in zombie voice)must read more

now that's what im talkin about awsome chap man i will HAVE 2 read more

Interesting chapter. If Temari is Naruto's half-sister does that mean that Minato cheated on Kushina when she was in Konoha cause I doubt that he would?

wow... that was a ** up ending... it was good but he died.. so sad...

TRILOGY! Yeah!

I think the ending was a bit short. I would appreciate a longer ending. A longer battle. And more description of Naruto's and Eva's feelings at Naruto's death.

:D

Thank you!

You have done and great job with this stories, I think you should make this in to a trilogy. Because this is an end if a arc of there lives. I thick Tenten should end up back on the geine exams to help Naruto to stay or at the begin of the Chain exams to help wave.

please make a triology for thsi stroy please what happens next? What about naruto> what about everyone?