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| another.creative.lover 7/26/12 . chapter 11
Okay, so the night you sent me off to read the only ten chapters of this story, I ended up researching each of these characters.
And I have to say: shivers down my spine.
I looked at each of them backwards and forwards and wow...
If the rituals didn't happen, this is probably what would have. x_x
Now I just have to look up Seijiro. (insert Jaws music here)
| Mocca-Marocchi 7/26/12 . chapter 11
Sae's ending is good too! She didn't realize her crime she committed after it had been too late... Poor girl! . She must be really mentally ill because of Yae's and Itsuki's absence. I also like the scene when Sae encountered Chitose. It was somehow touching... I don't know why.
I'm glad that you resume this story! Please update!
| Mocca-Marocchi 7/26/12 . chapter 10
It's been a long time! Sorry, I don't know the tenth chapter has been published until I got your story alert
What a tragic end of Kirie... She wasn't only dead, but also holding grudge against every living being... So sad! As usual, I like your style of writing this chapter. Good job!
| another.creative.lover 7/24/12 . chapter 10
OMIGOD THAT'S SUPER FREAKY.
Totally understand the beginning of this chapter now. x_x Jeez, too malicious.
But I'm sure that she has right for it.
It's like the grudge all over again. (sigh). Probably.
And yea. The dad's insane.
Falling in love isn't a sin.
Killing someone is.
Just saying. x_x
| another.creative.lover 7/24/12 . chapter 9
WHY IS EVERYONE DYING AND SUICIDING AND STUFF?
(throws brush to a mirror) I CAN'T TAKE IT. j 3 j
WHY DID KANAME DIE, HE JUST GAVE HER THAT LOVER'S STONE THING WAHHHHHHHHH
| another.creative.lover 7/24/12 . chapter 8
Guilt, pain, sorrow, cynicism-it's all here in all of these stories. :o
Wow... Itsuki killed himself. Q_Q
OMIGOD HE MURDERED HIS BROTHER AFDSGHJKL;
OMIGOD NOOO CHITOSE
I'm just going to go hide my face somewhere. Q_Q
| another.creative.lover 7/24/12 . chapter 7
Yeah. The dad's insane. He's a psychopath.
Only psychopaths enjoy killing people. I'm pretty sure he wouldn't hesitate in killing his daughter.
BUT OMIGOD HUYU! DDDD: I'M DYING RIGHT NOW WHY WOULD ANYONE KILL A BOY WHO OFFERS PEACHES AS A SIGN OF LOVE THEY WERE SO BEAUTIFUL
["Huyu, have you ever seen a woman in this house?"
"Uh…I haven't sir."
"Alright…but if you have, it could've been the spirit of my late wife."
"Spirit? Are you saying this house is haunted?"
"Maybe, maybe not. All I'm saying is that if you see a woman anywhere in the house; do not speak to her. Ever. Do you understand?"
WHUT. WHUT IS THIS.
| another.creative.lover 7/24/12 . chapter 6
... CAN YOU FEEL THE LOVE TONIGHT
CAN YOU FEEEEEL IT TOOOOOOOOO?
XD Just thought you might appreciate that.
I'm sorry I'm not being serious about this fic. j 3 j But I am. I seriously am.
D: God, that old hag. WHY U SUCH A BISCH?
... yeah, she likes a younger man. SHE'S A COUGAR.
| another.creative.lover 7/24/12 . chapter 5
Mutsuki: suicide or homicide?
There's this obsession with twins in here, huh? x_x And then one twin commits suicide/runs away/leaves/dies/gets killed by the other...
and the other one lives to regret it?
I like this story the most.
But I really hope Itsuki doesn't commit suicide. ; ;
| another.creative.lover 7/24/12 . chapter 4
"Sometimes nothing will happen...but at times, you will find a very special someone waiting for you at the top."
"...are you waiting for me at the top, Huyu?"
I saw this last part, and I totally died like ASDFGHJKL;AKJDFLKASFA;FKSF OMIGOD SHE WANTS HUYU TO WAIT FOR HER.
When I first read Huyu, I immediately shipped them. XD
Pretty bad of me, huh?
But seriously: dark eyes, slightly spiked hair in the wind, peach-cutter, bloody hand, AND gentlemanly? Who WOULDN'T be attracted to this man? XD
| another.creative.lover 7/24/12 . chapter 3
Actually you know what, screw everyone; NO ONE KNOWS HOW REIKA FEELS.
It's hard enough that you couldn't help your parents, but it's also hard to know that you gave up on them for your own life. Anyone would do that. We're all cowards, so we should never judge.
:D Another storyline, yay!
| another.creative.lover 7/24/12 . chapter 2
I really love this style. D:
I'm not sure if they're separate oneshots though. x-x
(fails at this fandom) x_x
But I love it. D:
The insanity, the love for a sibling...
... and the loss of a loved one. x_x
And I love the description of the red rain, and the thoughts in parentheses.
| another.creative.lover 7/24/12 . chapter 1
"Father, why is mother still sleeping?"
"She's very tired, Kirie."
"Why are people crying? She'll wake up soon, right?"
nice way to open up.
I've always like this style. The opening's very concise, but it hits you! I'm not sure what to expect, seeing as I'm not from this fandom, but I'm liking it. ;)
D: What happened to mommy? (dead)
Kirie? (still inside of the house after so many years)
Aw hell. x_x
| AmakuraVienna 12/8/11 . chapter 9
I can't wait Reika in next chapter!
| Mocca-Marocchi 2/24/10 . chapter 9
Good job! The story moves beautifully, and I like it!
Can't wait what will happen to Reika...