Oh, what a wonderful beginning! More! More!

i would love it if you uploaded more thanks i really like your story

please please please write on

This is fantastic. Wonderfully written. I hope you get inspired to write another chapter.

I hope that you continue with this story. Chapter 1 is a great start. Loved this show!

War Eagle,

Hm, that was a really great start! You were able to capture her nature quite well...I look forward to your next update and hope you haven't just given up on this story. I also wish they would have continue this great show...sadly there is little room for quality programs on television.

This is a nice start

I too dread the fact that Kings was canceled

Great start! Thanks for sharing. Can't wait to read more! Big fan of David and Michelle in Kings!

Very poetic. I like it so far and hope that you continue. :)

Great chapter! I'm really interested to see where u will take this.

Great first chapter! Cannot wait to read more of your story and about David and Michelle and want happens to them. Please keep going!

Excellent start, I am really excited to see where you are going with this.

I loved this series, so reading any sort of continuation of it (especially about David/Michelle) would be absolutely amazing. Please keep writing this, I'm very interested to hear your take on what happens next!

Good Chapter

KINGS LOVE!

I love your idea. And I am sincerely saddened by the fact that Kings will not be returning for a second season.

If you keep writing I will definitely keep reading.

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