 maiky1992 2009-08-09 . chapter 1i loved it. it´s funny how spock discovers and
describes jim´s looks. |
 RedCheckerz 2009-08-05 . chapter 1"Exactly. You've got to kiss me, now."
Haha awkward Kirk. |
 TheAmethystRiddle 2009-08-04 . chapter 1Eeheeheeheehee.
I quite liked that. Although, just a few things about Spock... I think perhaps he would have waited more than nine days (nine-point-two to be exact) before... acting. And is he really that much taller than Kirk? Lastly but most importantly, the "no, **..." comment seemed rather out of character.
Other than that, I can't stop giggling. Good job. |
 readonly1956 2009-08-03 . chapter 1Lol. TOS!Spock would *so* do that :D |
 Kokoroyume 2009-08-03 . chapter 1Funny and well writting :)
Thank you ! |
 MirrorFlower and DarkWind 2009-08-03 . chapter 1ahahhahahahah nice i loved it good job |
 Fullmetal Embers 2009-08-02 . chapter 1I love Spock, he so clever |
 jtbwriter 2009-08-02 . chapter 1I love it-that is so funny-and bittersweet in a way-great "what if?"-thanks! |