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Major Mike Powell III
2009-09-11 . chapter 15
Well, well, soldier...

Whoa! 15 chapters in 1 go?! LOL

Now, this...was...N-I-CE!

SO much Usagi/Senshi shoujo-ai! It was SO full of WIN! LMAO
My faves were the Usa/Ami and Usa/Setsuna chapters. They were all S-W-EET!
The ONLY thing missin' woulda been Usa/Minako. Why, oh WHY didn't you include Mina?! Damn it!

(Sigh)

Still!
Mission complete! Good work, marine!
Return to base for debrief and to get some rest. The drinks are on me.

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
Reader458
2009-08-20 . chapter 15
Hey, no fair. :P All this in one post.

Usagi/Makoto
Very sweet and tender. And nice details of the surroundings and how they tie in to the story.

Switch
Oh God, how will that go?

Ask
Okay? That was a strong beginning, I'd love to see where it lead.

Date
*Nods* I can see it happen that way.

Comvictions
Oh yeah, I can see that too. If Usagi worked up the nerve, I think that would happen actually.

It Was Awkward
*Sorry* Can't guess. But I did like it.

New
You play on the time Usagi made everyone lose their memories yeah? It makes sense.

Again
This one too maybe? Or are you hinting of their far past?

Power Basketball
Dunno what to say of it. *Scratches head*

Silent
Hmm, yeah.

Quiet
Usagi? Hmm, maybe, I would like to see it.

Vampyre
Oh God, must you tease me with these things?

Woo- Summer
That was..short?

Homework
Ahh Nury. That poor girl gets all to little love. I mean really, Umino?

Interview
Yeah, that should have happened at one point or other.

Push
Yeah, I agree Usagi, waiting is so boring.

Warrior
OC?

Ami-Wolf
Tease. :P

Good luck with the writing
Reader458
Reader458
2009-08-20 . chapter 14
Bwahahaha.

*Hugs his poor abused muscles* Ow ow ow.

Oh dear, that will be chaos. *Snicker* Oh the ruckus it will cause.


Good luck with the writing
Reader458
Reader458
2009-08-20 . chapter 13
*Sniffle* Poor Ami.
I wonder what made Usagi and Ami give up so fast? Why not just tell Rei to step away for a while.

Probably too pragmatik thinking of me. Feelings are never so clear-cut, ne?

Good luck with the writing
Reader458
Reader458
2009-08-20 . chapter 12
*Blinks* That was..yeah, odd is probably the only word that fits.

I liked it, but it also makes me confused. Good writing it is anyway.

Good luck with the writing
Reader458
Reader458
2009-08-20 . chapter 11
*Left nostril* Snort. *Right nostril* Snort.

Ahh, that was some good crack. *Goes cross-eyed* Yep, definately.

Nice caricatyres of the senshi.

Good luck with the writing
Reader458
Reader458
2009-08-20 . chapter 10
*Speechless silense*

*Groan* You are trying to kill me, aren't you? Look what you have done, the bunnies are multiplying.

This was very good. I loved Usagi dressed in a tux. Now I have to get my hands on an image of that.

Good luck with the writing
Reader458
Reader458
2009-08-20 . chapter 9
Dun Dun Dun!

Oh bummer. I can feel a plotbunny being spawned. Oh My God. Now I have an urge to write Usagi/Setsuna.

*Bashes head against the desk*

Seems like I will be writing for a long long while. *Sheepish smile*

Good luck with the writing
Reader458
Reader458
2009-08-20 . chapter 8
*Wails at the injustice*

Ahem, right.

Really nice. I especially liked Usagi's "We’re here for you, me more than anyone else."

Good luck with the writing
Reader458
Reader458
2009-08-20 . chapter 7
Okay, this is going to be the first time in this little collection I say this:
It was to short!
How the heck you did it I will probably never know, but this story really catched my attention.

I don't think I have ever read a story that have gotten me inside Usagi's head as this one did. I felt like i had a connection to her.

Good luck with the writing
Reader458
Reader458
2009-08-20 . chapter 6
Aw.

That is so good. I loved how toned down it was, no big things happening, just a quite little love-story. Don't get me wrong, I loved the other ones to, but this was special.

Good luck with the writing
Reader458
Reader458
2009-08-20 . chapter 5
Ohohoho. Meeting the parents? Yeah, that is a major time for nerves.

Good luck with the writing
Reader458
Reader458
2009-08-20 . chapter 4
Damnit! It still makes me cry.
*Cough* Sorry about that.

You write so very very good. I can so easily feel their emotions.
*Ponders* Nah, I'm quite happy about how I Sets is reacting in my story. No need to change that now.

Good luck with the writing
Reader458
Reader458
2009-08-20 . chapter 3
Poor poor Mako-chan. What torture she have to go through.
I wonder though, did Usagi take lessons?

Good luck with the writing
Reader458
Reader458
2009-08-20 . chapter 2
Ohh, I like. A very interesting start, and you just had to end it in a cliffhanger, didn't you? :p

I wish not so many authors who writes this kind of Usagi were so prone to stop the story after a while.

Good luck with the writing (and with French-class)
Reader458
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