I read this all in 48 hours. Best fanfic EVER. Please update soon!

-That's neat about Flamel!

"Just what do you think you two are doing?"

-Like she doesn't know already, but I suppose the forms must be obeyed. I can see why Severus would have a really hard time keeping a straight face, snicker.

oh, wow. this story is just- wow. Its amazing. So happy for Sev. Even if he decides to do nothing amazing with the rest of his life, he is still someone important in the wizarding world. He'll even be famous once they get past the legal hurdles. His future is secure. And especially happy for Remus. Lycanthropy has dominated his life for so long, I bet he has a lot to get used to. And Remus actually has a chance for a better future now. Hes going to have to rethink his options now that there is nothing holding him back from doing whatever he wants to do with his life now. The best part is that Remus and Severus don't need Dumbledore at all now. And Walburga no longer has anything to hold over their heads. Awesome story, update soon!

I'm truly hooked up on your story...
Update soon!
It is soo goood

...after him upsetting Lily the first time, I'd think he'd learn his lesson. But apparently not.

Wow, Severus gave quite a speech. Good for him. Maybe it’ll get through to Potter.

Looks like magic isn’t too good with spinal injuries.
Hopefully Potter won’t cause problems with his beliefs. ...hopefully he’ll get over what Severus had said to him earlier, too.

Hmm... If the accident was because of the recital, then was Lily in the car the first time around?
Can magic help Petunia?

The beer thing is still amusing. Perhaps it’s from hearing his side of it now. Hmm... also, it sounds like he thinks she messed with the drinks, but the potion messed with his tasting it, right? So... did he not think to try buying a beer and drinking it on the spot? Or can he just not understand it?
Heh, poor Petunia. Severus seems to have gotten used to his haircut and stuff by now. He didn’t seem to notice Petunia looking at him oddly.
Hmm... Maybe if Petunia can think of it, she could ask Severus about getting a makeover (at least something to do with her hair, the way Snape got a different kind of shampoo). Heh, a girl wanting to be fatter. How odd.
Looks like most of the kids have thought about Severus. He might end up having some busy summers in the future.
Wow... Does his father Want him to have a baby? It sounded like his talk was kind of detailed. Hmm... I wonder if it’s normal for parents to talk like a sex-ed teacher. Seems like they mention ‘the talk’ on TV a lot. For me, I knew quite a bit around 7 from watching TV, but it wasn’t until I was around 10 or 11 that a girl at school told me the actual tools were the same things you use the bathroom with (and thought I was kind of stupid for not knowing). I had just thought that it involved foreplay and kissing to exchange chromosomes, and that women had c-sections, before that. Though, Severus is older here than I was when I found out, and I’d always thought I’d learned quite late.

Hmm... Interesting about Mr. Snape seeming different. Seems there’s been a lot of changes with people. Not really sure if, if someone could go back in time like that, that people would change that drastically from a few small things, or if it would take a lot more than that. But, it’s kind of interesting to think that things could turn out a lot different from one changed decision and such. (oh, also, it’s nice that Severus gets to have some advanced work. Though... I think if I could go back and change my childhood, I wouldn’t feel as proud for achievements as I would have the first time. Kind of like cheating this way... Though, if I could just go back for a few minutes at a time a few times, and have both sets of memories afterward, it would be pretty nice if I could use the information that was pretty much kept from me, to get some more advanced classes than I did.)
Oh, poor Severus. And his extra years probably only dulled the sight a little. ...at least he didn’t see that when he really was young.
Oh, I like how Severus is talking to his parents like they’re teenagers or something, telling them to keep the activity isolated to their bedroom. ...I thought he should say something along those lines to them, but I was thinking more like a request... But, I think it’s funny the way he’s telling them.
...Did she do something to him? Well, I think I may have wondered if she could have done something to help with getting him to stop drinking, but... now I wonder, since Severus has just asked.
Heh. Now That is a good potion. Hmm... I wonder why she did it this time. And, I guess all he needed was to get away from the liquor. ...so, he wasn’t upset with her over it?
So he kept trying for a couple weeks, huh? Poor guy. I guess the stuff I’d wondered about was answered pretty quickly.

Ooo, this fic sounds interesting so far. Everything seems to be going really well so far, too. ...I really need to be working on something, though I'm quite tempted to keep reading.

Yes, being Flamel's intern/apprentice would at least make Dumbledore think twice before throwing Snape into the fray.

And James Potter should really learn the names of the people in his own house. (true, Harry never did, either...).

Good chapter.

Another great chapter. I am excited to find out about your spin on James as Narcissa. Also when is all the Sev and Lily moments I just love Sev and Lily. THX!

love this story soooo much please update soon x

So awesome! Sev gets another chance! :D