Its VEERY good. i like that its not bella/jacob, not that im against that pairing, but i also like bella beein a shapeshifter. its funny. ever since i started reading fanfiction, i almost cant read the actual books, cuz bella just seems so weak to me.

I really like this chapter and your story. So am I understanding right that Edward can only hear Bella's thoughts when she is a wolf and that she does smell like dog to him? But wouldn't the rest of the Cullen's smell the dog scent from Bella, like at lunch when she walked by the table?

this is great i hope u carry oon i cant wait 4 more

Looks good. I'm curious about what Renee told Charlie. Should be something really interesting. Keep up the good work.