 Fire From Above 2009-12-12 . chapter 8Aw, too bad Starscream is only doing that because he lost a bet to Megatron and not because he really wants to spend time with the Seekers. And it's quite interesting to know that those two gamble on horse races. |
 recyclablefoxx 2009-12-11 . chapter 8*does a weird, funky, fangirl dance* You updated! :D Aw, poor Rumble. Hope Starscream makes it up to him, somehow (intentionally or unintentionally). They're just so cute together <3 |
 I Caught Myself 2009-12-11 . chapter 8Don't worry about the ending, I think it's fine! Keep up the good work :) |
 tubular_turtle 2009-12-11 . chapter 8 I think that in the next chapter rumble should like avoid starscream, holding a grudge against him while screamer discovers his feeling for rumble. |
 Jovianokamigirl 2009-12-10 . chapter 8In other words, Starscream won't be with his trine if he hadn't lost that bet with Megatron. Geez, when is Starscream going to see that his trine really cares about him? |
 herongale 2009-12-10 . chapter 8Woo! Do something, Rumble! DO SOMETHING! Starscream is totally clueless! Make him unclueless! |
 glompmeXD 2009-12-10 . chapter 8yay, i did enjoy this chapter. at least after this trip skywarp wont be so clingy to starscream. looking forward to the next chapter XD |
 Tugera 2009-11-17 . chapter 7Haa, cute with the explosion.. XDD
Love how canon this all feels. ^^
Ohh, now Starscream shall use Rumble to make Soundwave mad. XDD Their relationship grows..! :heart: |
 Wol Lo 2009-11-16 . chapter 7?
I'm lost here...does Wheeljack's invention caused the explosion? Or they're not related? |
 glompmeXD 2009-11-16 . chapter 7woohoo, i was wondering what was going on with this story. yay, rumble has made an impression on starscream, starscream enjoys his company but is still suspiceous of him, also thinks soundwave is worried about rumble and soundwave believes that starscream is up to no good. ahh the confusion im just waiting for one of them to make an aft of themselves. and where is skywarp? has he also got a diabolical plan? ahh please update soon. awesome writing:) |
 Carmilla DeWinter 2009-11-16 . chapter 7While I doubt that Starscream has anything that could be called tender feelings yet, it's still nice to see some emotional development there. And when it's done in such a cute Starscream-ish way, it's doubly nice. |
 Moonbeam's Predilections 2009-11-16 . chapter 7Oh c'mon, Soundwave! Is it so hard to believe Starscream might just be interested in Rumble? Cuz I'm telling ya, as a fellow purveyor of this cracktastic pairing, that they are definitely compatible. Down right combustible even! In other words, HOT! Rawr!
GreyLilly, please continue. And don't mind Soundwave's distrust, he's just being a big worrywart. He'll settle down once he realises just how good for Rumble regular sex Starscream can be. *g* |
 Jovianokamigirl 2009-11-16 . chapter 7Ha, so Sceamer is getting use to annoying little Rumble. Wonder how far things can go for the two before something happens. Or more like Soundwave dose something to stop it. Love the whole Wheeljack invention explosin on Rumble and Starscream. I could see their faces when that happen. Kept up the good work. |
 FrozenMetal 2009-11-16 . chapter 7This story is AWESOME! ^^ Update soon, please!! |
 herongale 2009-11-16 . chapter 7This story just keeps growing on me! It's so adorable and I love it to pieces. Good job. :) |