 Laguna's twin sister 2009-08-23 . chapter 1Aw this is so cute. Gwendal was mushy without being mushy at all. I must admit the small twist in the end was a bit unexpected though, because I was expecting more of a dance than the stuff that happened. Nonetheless, it was still a good twist.
There are some typos, especially at the 2nd half, but it's no biggie. Overall it was a nice waffy fic. Good job! |