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Reviews for: The Taste of Regret
Laguna's twin sister
2009-08-23 . chapter 1
Aw this is so cute. Gwendal was mushy without being mushy at all. I must admit the small twist in the end was a bit unexpected though, because I was expecting more of a dance than the stuff that happened. Nonetheless, it was still a good twist.

There are some typos, especially at the 2nd half, but it's no biggie. Overall it was a nice waffy fic. Good job!
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