o my god! you cant just end an awesome story like that! you MUST tell me what happens. even if the next chapter is like - john took a step forward but got shot and died.- its to awesome to stop writting.

Nice! I always did like to see some imagination as to what could have happened to John after the events of "Born to Run". I found it very interesting that John was compared to a coydog, how he's not afraid of the machines like the rest of them, making him more dangerous as a result. It was a bit melancholic to see John commenting how different "this" Kyle and "this" Derek were so different to the ones he knew.

Hello there!

I can't believe there are no reviews of your wonderful story! In fact, it's one of the best post-BtR stories I've read!

The only thing I'm totally opposed to is the "complete" mark. I think you should write more. I can't say for the others, but, I'll read it with so much pleasure. Please update, it's worth it! :)