 Tatsumaki-sama 2009-08-04 . chapter 1Very interesting. At first, just by the summary, I got the impression that Kyle didn't want to go because he was in love with someone else or something like that. Turns out that he was in love with *this* Sarah from his own timeline. I liked how you wrote Kyle's emotions, how he didn't want to leave Sarah, how he hated his own son. And Sarah was done really nicely too. She insisted him that he goes back, to save her and essentially, make her fall for him again. |