|Reviews for Strange Return|
| Arshe 2/24/13 . chapter 12
HEHEH Nev giving Riddle the bird(one fingered salute) LOLR
| Arshe 2/24/13 . chapter 9
HOW DARE YOU! (GLARE) use Shikamaru's Natrutocatch pharse for THAT BASTARD!(snarl)
| to save or raze 11/29/12 . chapter 9
awsome has an "e" at the end
| Anira De'Ember 10/17/12 . chapter 2
Meh, your spelling could be worse. Believe me, I've seen it. :-) This would be the third or fourth time I've read your series. Still as entertaining as it was when I started...
| In-The-Shadow-Of-the-Robot 10/4/12 . chapter 8
Thats what My sister did when she was waiting for her GCSE results. Hilarious.
| In-The-Shadow-Of-the-Robot 10/3/12 . chapter 4
I said that to my friend when I was 10! 1 year before you! Oh. I ment "Welcome to hell, there are no exits" ! HOLY SAMOLE! TRAJRTNBCVNRTBSTNSBTRMKHGFJN TJKZJTFTJNRTJNMJYNTWQRTEYETU HTFGNCVZBVCNVBXMNVBNXNGMNCVX NFGZJFGNGFJHFTGNGFNGXXNJGFJN FGNJGHFGJHURTFGN - translation "thats cool."
| why u wanna no 8/31/12 . chapter 4
NO IT DOESNT! IT MAKES YOU HAPPY AND DIZZYEY AND HAPPY AND... Ok a little crazy! But Chocolate is so GOOD! (oddly enough, guess what I had for breakfast...)
| I'm on a sugar high 5/7/12 . chapter 10
Wow, everyone is so OOC! Sanzo even said cool and has his own stalker club, I laughed so hard when I read that! This story is great though, love it!;)
| Athina Dark-Angel of Death 6/30/11 . chapter 17
I love this crossover so much.
| Lenbug 5/23/11 . chapter 12
Yes Voldemort. Quirrel was that stupid when you possessed him. Karma comes full circle. Seriously, this chapter was awesome! Keep it up
| tag.0 4/14/11 . chapter 9
Just had to make this comment, as I am re-reading the series...
"Really, children were so awkward. They cared nothing for the Greater Good, seeing nothing but their own, selfish wants."
*points at bit above* Lump of coal calling kettle black, there! *grins*
Question. Would you like a beta who will correct typos for you? I'm perfectly willing to do so; to be honest, I think it will increase your readership. I'm really enjoying the series, but it's still somewhat hard for me to push through the misspellings (though I can understand, as my sister is dyslexic). Anyway, the offer is out there.
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter in Shifting Dark!
| Sakura Lisel 11/14/10 . chapter 1
Hmm... When Harry's letter showed up, and hopefully the Dursleys didn't try to steal it this time for fear of their lives *lol*, why didn't Harry say in whatever acceptance letter he sent back that he already had someone who could have taken him to Diagon Alley for his supplies, and just arrange to go with Draco and his family? *lol*
Plus at the beginning of this chapter, you said that both Draco AND Harry had inheirited their family fortunes, so why would he even agree to the need of an escort to begin with, if he already knows the way to Diagon Alley, if the whole 'inheirted his family fortunes' is true?
| tag.0 8/23/10 . chapter 11
I'm rather enjoying this series, but just a quick note: "Bosatsu" is not a name, it's a title - "bodhisattva" in Japanese. So it would be "the Bosatsu", or "Kanzeon", but not just "Bosatsu".
| alyabunny 6/22/10 . chapter 17
This story was so great! I read AVLP and look forward to reading the sequal to this! You also pulled me out of a horrible fic rut that I was in! I love you for what you have written and hope you continue doing so.
| Biennia Baron 5/7/10 . chapter 9
Okay, I was just wondering, what is going on with Goku. I understand that he is a very difficult character to write but nonetheless, there is no information on his other yokai form. He doesnt seem to fit the character of a "Monkey" and is not very impulsive. Also isn't he suppose to be very attached to Sanzo and didn't the hat mention that? I mean in the manga the only real reason Gokus limiter is broken, usually , is because something happened to Sanzo. Or in rare cases the limiter is physically removed.
Moving on, I really enjoy the story so far, (except for the things mentioned above)and I look forward to the rest.