 olivia1010 5/9/12 . chapter 1WHAT ? |
 Esther 4/6/11 . chapter 1 u have a right to be paranoid! How could u? that's just depressing! write something cheery already! im not trying to be a flamer but i hate sad stories. :) |
 LupineSerpent 10/27/10 . chapter 1Interesting cliffhanger. |
 MysterySpot 5/8/10 . chapter 1I really don't know how to review on that one...(that's good by the way) Just know I liked it. |
 A Scarlet Rebel 2/26/10 . chapter 1I love this drabble too! I loved how Annabeth was so uncertain. I hope she loves him too! :)
-Scars |
 cookie-pocky-strawberry-love 2/7/10 . chapter 1oh my god! you should so do a second part! |
 H-DAWG 9/11/09 . chapter 1 What the hell was that? |
 PERCABETHGIRL-12 8/8/09 . chapter 1could be longer...
Update ASAP |
 b-ballPrincess 8/5/09 . chapter 1very cute and a nice cliffy |
 oneoffour111 8/3/09 . chapter 1Oh, my. That was unexpected. Powerful, too. It's more of a drabble than a story, so...nice drabble. :) |
 silverbird88 8/3/09 . chapter 1This is another story I can understand without having read Percy Jackson! This one does not even require a knowledge of Greek mythology. |
 TheAngel'sWings 8/3/09 . chapter 1I do like this. It's an interesting idea, exploring all the what-ifs of Percabeth futures. |
 guywhosings28 8/3/09 . chapter 1I think it's good to explore different scenarios...it's short, but I like it. |
 werewolf-in-training 8/3/09 . chapter 1i like it! It sounds like what would happen... |