Wow this was great! I just got my fanfic account and im not sure what to write about, i got so desperate i started doing harry potter (which isnt that bad but i dont normally think of harry potter when fanfics are in mind) i support pokemon, and although i never really got into any shippings, this story probably pulled me onto the Pokeshipping side! Im thinking to doing an AAM fanfic now, but im not to confident about it. what do you think? Luved the story btw, 20 out of 5 stars!

I almost cried.. Scratch that, I did cry. D':

It was AMAZING. Keep Writing!

-Colorful Pikachu.

this story is really good!

Hi!

this story is my first fav. and you are my fav. author...hope you also read my story...

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silver-mistyx90

That was so sad! :(

I can't believe you put Ash's life in danger like that! You're evil. (JK!) Ya know... that was one long chapter. Really long.

When I was reading, I was listening to my mp3, and the songs that played one right after another really go with this story. I'm still listening to songs that would be appropriate for this. (It would take to long to name them all, so I'm not gonna.)

In my conclusion to this sad fanfic, I must say that it's one of my favorite AAML's that I've ever read! (I have no idea why, but I love the fanfics that have to do with real-life stuff like that- or things close to that, anyway.

Well, can't wait to read more of your AAML fanfics! TTFN!

So fresh and original! So cute! I love it! 100 points!

I liked it.

But: Ash has chocolate brown eyes, not amber.

wow this is a great story can you please write another?

Very nice, very sweet

I'm impressed. Very impressed. You've what it takes to become a novelist.

omg i luv it! e!

I know that the “Ash gets sick” concept has been used so many times"

it's true but you do it very well!I really like your story it's so dramatic and ash is sweet like always take care

huh, misty acted rather pathetically. can't stand girls who do that. everyone is entitled to breaking down; but to do so when someone needs your help is simply weak and unforgivable. never liked hospital staff who were syringe-happy but for once i think someone deserved it. the rest of the story was okay though.

just re-writing this for favorites.

sincerely,

evan, a fan of aaml

great story! love the idea of ash getting sick, misty's problem with what might happen, ash getting better, and them getting together. this shows true essence!

sincerely,

evan, a fan of aaml

p.s- you need a author's award, i see what i can do.