 Xbittersweetdreamsx 2/14/11 . chapter 8 Pretty awesome story |
 YamiBlaze 2/20/10 . chapter 8What's gonna happen to Kouichi? |
 Grey vs Ale 1/31/10 . chapter 1 Awesome story! can't wait for the next chapter! Albeit i am only on chapter one i will catch up. Keep on writing! |
 Twilight Phantom Dragon 10/24/09 . chapter 7Nice job! It was interesting. And yay, Grumblemon arrives! |
 DigiBleach 10/24/09 . chapter 7Good job on the chapter I really liked it! I liked how you had the head bashing against the machine that was awesome! Can't wait for next chapter. Ugh I just remebered I got to catch up to like three other stories! Well good luck with everything bye! |
 DigiBleach 10/13/09 . chapter 6Wow! Great chapter now I can't wait to see how they all get together and how more bad guys are introduced. Good luck with your typing, I just started typing the next chapter of my story, cuz I hand write it first. :P Anyway good jjob and good luck with everything, even school! |
 Twilight Phantom Dragon 10/12/09 . chapter 6Nice work. I'm looking forwards to the next chapter! |
 Twilight Phantom Dragon 9/5/09 . chapter 5Nice chapter! It was nice to see that Chaiki didn't leave Zoe in the Floramon's restaurant. A little stick can go a long way if there's enough force behind it I never watched Winx Club, but I remember seeing commercials for it. I didn't know it was Italian, but I agree that Kazemon does scream fairy. Update soon. |
 DigiBleach 9/5/09 . chapter 5Wow I didn't know Wix Club was from Italy! Wow! And the next person is Junpei/JP can't wait to see it! I mean read it. Anyway good luck with the next chapter. I like how both worlds are combined it's awesome! |
 DigiBleach 8/28/09 . chapter 4Hey I just remembered something!Does this all happen on the same day I forgot. :P Anyway can't wait to see hoe J.P.'s and Zoe's chapters come out. Oh... sorry about the writers block hope it goes away soon. Digi |
 Twilight Phantom Dragon 8/27/09 . chapter 4Nice chapter. I liked the fact that Katsuharu and Teppei actually wanted to help Tommy out when it came to Hayato and then the Bakemon. It's nice to see that not all bullies are completely cruel to their prey.
I totally understand the writer's block and laziness thing. I've had the same problem before too. Overall, great chapter. I can't wait to see the next one! |
 DigiBleach 8/13/09 . chapter 3 Hey it's me again and I don't always feel like loging in. Sorry :P Anyway AWESOME CHAPTER! Koji and Kouichi (Ispell it different) met. wow that was a really cool way you put him in. Can't wait till everyone gets their spirits then thet meet! Eek! I still have to update my story. Oh well good luck with the next chapter! |
 Twilight Phantom Dragon 8/13/09 . chapter 3Nice chapter! I was pleased with it since Koji is one of my favorite characters in Frontier. Koji and Koichi meeting earlier was a pleasant surprise! Twists are always nice and so far I'm liking how this story is going. I can't wait to see the next chapter. |
 Twilight Phantom Dragon 8/7/09 . chapter 2Great work! This looks like a promising story. I can't wait for the next update! |
 xxShatteredSoulxx 8/7/09 . chapter 2Yay! u updated! hm...i wonder who the others are!*sarcasm* lol can't wait to see who we're introduced to next!
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