I like it so far and I hope you update again sometime soon.

very good so far.

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!

really good chapter so keep it up

has potential i hope you will contiune this fic

Pokegirls!

I love them so much...

The story looks nice so far! I especially like that you are writing a story with Celestials WITHOUT making them manipulative, borderline evil, I-will-do-what-the-greater-good-requires-even-at-cost-of-innocent-people jerks. Celestials that are actually written as good people seem to not so common...

Good luck with your story! (now write the next chapter.)

good story

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!

i actually kind of expected a pokegirl story eventually (although i assumed it would be a naruto/pokegirl story) it seems all the good authors try their hand at a pokergirl story eventually. i like it so far. although the ending notes were a bit much. also after the main character mekes a scene i keep thinkin hes gonna look at the crowd and yell "the f(beep) y'all lookin at?!"

p.s. i finally got around to watching neon genesis evangelion today. if youve ever seen it can you please explain WTF happened in the last 2 episodes? maybe i haven't seen enough anime to be able to undserstand crazy anime logic but all episode 25 and 26 did was give me a headache.

good story so far.

Huh. Haven't seen a Pokegirl story around here in months. Fortunatly, this is very well-written.

^_^

Always enjoy your work.