|Reviews for The Goddess and the Sky|
| The Layman 6/10/10 . chapter 17
And so, things get even more complicated for Sora, Keiichi, and the goddesses. Oh boy...
And nice job with these pop culture referances, I actually got a couple of them. (Although there was a decided lack of omakes. Oh well, maybe next chapter.)
Now update so Aoshima can get down from that balloon!
| The Layman 5/26/10 . chapter 16
As always, it was very good. In fact, I already pre-ordered tickets for DOWN it was so good!
Anyways, it seems we're slowly uncovering the mystery of Keiichi's mysterious angel. I can't wait for the big, ties-everything-together conclusion!
| BrazeRancor 5/26/10 . chapter 16
I do have to say, this has gotten very interesting very quickly. I'd say it almost rivals Davner's work. I say almost because Davner is (currently) the undisputed god of AMG fanfiction. But damn me if this isn't just as entertaining.
| The Mad shoe1 5/15/10 . chapter 15
Really interesting fic i must say, when i first read that it was a Sora/Belldandy fic i thought it was going to be another lame yuri story, but i loved how you kept Keiichi as a main character and how important he still is to the story.
| Zoro50 5/5/10 . chapter 15
The Good: The interaction between Sayoko and Keiichi was very well done. I enjoyed the date type stuff immenseley. Seeing him start of the date almost afriad to speak and gradually gain confidence was well done. It was also an interesting observation you made that he would not neccessarily enjoy the destruction at the monster-truck rally, but would love the mechanics of it.
The Bad: Maybe its just me, but at times Keiichi seems to come off as a really angry person. Especially when thinking about his Seniors at the Auto Club. That never struck me as his attitude in the original series. Also I think this chapter suffered from formating. Especially in the middle during the Sora section. Based on experience its probably just FFN, but its there.
The Other: For a series I thought was going to be centered around Sora and Belldandy I saw very little of them this chapter. Not that I didn't enjoy what you wrote, but there it is.
| Brocky 5/4/10 . chapter 15
Okay, Peorth seems kinda random. not sure where that's going. I guess its not a bad thing that i don't know who keiichi is going to end up with, but its starting to drag on, taking place of some of the compelling story thats supposed to draw the reader in.
| The Layman 5/3/10 . chapter 15
Hmm, OK, OK, good so far-Wait, what's this? AOSHIMA MAY OR MAY NOT HAVE BEEN KILLED IN AN EXPLOSION? Oh well, he was a jerkwadd anyways. *sniggers* (And the Truckasaurus Omake was good too!)
| BrazeRancor 5/3/10 . chapter 15
Shit, you created a likable Sayoko. But I like Keiichi with Urd. And the Angel was awesome too.
So conflicted... But a good chapter.
| BrazeRancor 3/26/10 . chapter 14
But... DAMMIT. I definitely need more. The Cylon was an amusing touch.
| The Layman 3/21/10 . chapter 14
Well, the "bug" problem has been taken care of, "Thirteen" looks like he'll become a mainstay (this also screams "source" vibes. Oh, if only Skuld could get her hands on that one...), Keiichi will finally have his date with Sayoko, and Urd seems to have caught an angel.
Dude, PLEASE update this next chapter faster than the last one, PLEASE!
| TakeshiKovacs987 3/21/10 . chapter 14
This is highly original among OMG! fics. The characterization is clear and thorough while the premise remains fresh and intriguing. It saddens me at the meager amount of reviews you've got. All I can offer is you got one more fan.
| ZeroTheDestroyer 3/7/10 . chapter 12
Nice could use a little less POV of everyone though. Gets kind of annoying. good fic.
| Chownz 2/12/10 . chapter 13
Well done, love the plot twist of the main characters. Though does it seem that Sora is more and more begin to act/react like Kei? Must be me! Well keep up the great work though you've got a long way before you can over come the master that is DAVNER! LOL just kidding... ;D
Ka kite ano
| The Layman 2/8/10 . chapter 13
Again? That's the third time this week! Anyways, everyone seems to be in a bit of a pickle, don't they? (Though Sora's pickle seems like a girkin right now.) Why did the anomoly have such a stong reaction to alcohol? Who will save Keiichi from the train? Will Sayoko even get out of the elevator? And for that matter will she even get that book? (seiously, that has such potential to go either way. You HAVE to write more!) Find out in the next chapter of The Goddess and the Sky, coming soon (hint hint!)
| Zoro50 1/29/10 . chapter 12
Good chapter here Willz, thoroughly enjoyed it especially the end.
The Good: Keichi's interactions with the various women surrounding him this chapter was excellent. Especially his interaction with Urd. The characterization was spot on, Keichi being the shy nervous kid we all know love from early in the series and Urd being Urd. The little hints of romance were also cool. I also found myself highly interested in how things turn out with that book. A little unusual from Urd's usual mischief, but that too was good, separating here a bit from the common stereotypes placed on her.
The Bad: Nothing really here. I agree with Sora that the robot is a bit creepy, but it doesn't really detract from the story in any real way.
The Other: Czn't wait to see how Keichi's "date" with Sayoko goes and how the book actually does influence her. Also look forward to seeing Sora's confidence grows under Bell's love and care.
Keep up the good work!