This is so cool! I never would've thought this up! I'm writing my own NCIS fanfic, but I doubt you'll see it on here unless my mom loosens up a LOT!

can't wait to read more hope you update soon

So Tony's her dad, hmm? I should have figured... :)
The thing with Caf-Pow and Abby was great and made me laugh a lot. I could totally imagine that happening on the show. :D
Keep up the great work!

~DancerGrl16~ ^-^

Aw go Emma she deff likes jake. Really great chapter. Poor emma she was never allowed to do anything. I loved it. Cant wait to see what happens next. Update soon =D

could jake be jacob black?

I'm in suspense about who her dad is! I hope you update soon! :)

~DancerGrl16~ ^-^

Oh my gosh this is really interesting. This is very good. I cant wait to see who her dad is. Cant wait to see the next chapter. Update soon =D

update soon!

Interesting, please continue!

love it so far can't wait for more