 Arianna Jolie Cullen 2009-12-31 . chapter 3 This is so cool! I never would've thought this up! I'm writing my own NCIS fanfic, but I doubt you'll see it on here unless my mom loosens up a LOT! |
 crs529 2009-09-02 . chapter 3can't wait to read more hope you update soon |
 DancerGrl16 2009-08-05 . chapter 3So Tony's her dad, hmm? I should have figured... :)
The thing with Caf-Pow and Abby was great and made me laugh a lot. I could totally imagine that happening on the show. :D
Keep up the great work!
~DancerGrl16~ ^-^ |
 Madison-Gibbs 2009-08-05 . chapter 3Aw go Emma she deff likes jake. Really great chapter. Poor emma she was never allowed to do anything. I loved it. Cant wait to see what happens next. Update soon =D |
 MyLifeIsAverage 2009-08-05 . chapter 3could jake be jacob black? |
 DancerGrl16 2009-08-04 . chapter 1I'm in suspense about who her dad is! I hope you update soon! :)
~DancerGrl16~ ^-^ |
 Madison-Gibbs 2009-08-04 . chapter 1Oh my gosh this is really interesting. This is very good. I cant wait to see who her dad is. Cant wait to see the next chapter. Update soon =D |
 MyLifeIsAverage 2009-08-03 . chapter 1update soon! |
 Writer9 2009-08-03 . chapter 1 Interesting, please continue! |
 jasper41164 2009-08-03 . chapter 1love it so far can't wait for more |