 Phoenix Satori 2009-10-17 . chapter 2So...I should definitely have read the AN in the first chapter to *begin with,* but I failed to do so until now, and...er...now I just feel like an idiot.
But I can still tell you how much I LOVED this, can't I? CAN'T I?!
And I DID. It was so sweet, and cute, and such a marvelous treat to watch Casey and Derek's relationship actively evolving before my very eyes. It's especially glorious to see it all happening amidst the Birth of their BABY SIBLING.
Making out in the hospital while their parents are busy with the screaming spawn that shares their blood...am I sick to think that that DOUBLES the hotness factor?
The Venturi Tripartite Menace at the beginning was decidedly excellent.
'Marti giggled, and Derek shot him a proud smile.
Ugh, these three. I swear.' --Gold, I tell you. GOLD.
'“That is not a fair bet.”' -hahahaha, CASEY. She is *such* a diabolical mastermind.
I think both names were wonderfully chosen. I'm partial to Adam, especially, for a boy's name, and I think it's *perfect* for the next in the Line of Venturis. Amelia's a beautiful name as well, however; thanks for taking the time to be thoughtful about choosing their names, they're marvelously fitting.
Great, great fic. |
 Phoenix Satori 2009-10-07 . chapter 1Fantastico!
I have to be in class twelve minutes ago, but I'll definitely be back in a bit to give this the proper review it deserves, and also to read the second chapter!
I can't believe I missed the sequel(s)!
And I hear there's P*RN! (I am a simple beast, easily plied with the promise of the sexitiemz.)
I SHALL RETURN.
But.
You should know.
I love this. |
 daisy617 2009-08-30 . chapter 1Ahh sorry it took me forever to read this! It was so adorable though! I loved it. And Im glad you had the idea to have one story with a boy and one with a girl. I wouldn't have been able to choose either LOL Awesome story! |
 Elodie Wolfe 2009-08-15 . chapter 2Auh. |
 mayfair22 2009-08-08 . chapter 1I really want it to be a a girl...I don't know why...and this was truly adorable...really cute...very enjoyable and i love the way Derek is suddenly comfortable with PDA...if it involves Casey...
:) |
 itsi3 2009-08-07 . chapter 1Hilarious! I read the If It's A Girl one cause I'ld love to see Derek wrapped around another little girls finger! He's such a softy! I Love both names though!! I skipped through If It's A Boy. I LOVE how both names fit so wonderfully with our favorite blended family!
~Crystal |
 Victorias Twisted Angel 2009-08-07 . chapter 1Aww, I love it so much. Derek and Casey in this story a seriously adorable, especially Derek. I really want to hug him haha. I think when this story is over I'll read it again but in the male version. |
 WhenLighteningStrikes 2009-08-06 . chapter 2Aww...so adorable. I think this particular style suited this fic a lot because I really think this wasn't the time for angsty/dark/introspective stuff. Something like a baby is always so...uniting. I love how they're bantering and being all McDonald-Venturi but beneath that there's a real undercurrent of uncontrollable happiness. Even with all the baggage that the baby is bringing with him (I read the boy, although I SO wanted the girl, but I thought we'd even out!) they're still loving and accepting because, heck, he's their blood. And it was a totally real family scene, with the various misadventures that accompanied (and Ralph!) and their dysfuctionally brilliant Christmas. Just very, very awesome and so hot in parts. I just LOVE the fact that Derek has forgone his ‘No PDA’ rule for her and can’t seem to keep his hands to himself <3
Waiting for the next installment! (Ooh, maybe it’s what I think it is… :) |
 LindsaylovesPacey 2009-08-06 . chapter 2Aww! I had to read both, you know it! That was so sweet...I loved the names. Amelia and Adam were very cute. Have you heard anything about when the first LWD movie is coming out? Just curious...anyway, loved it...er, them...both! Later, Brandi |
 ronandhermioneareforever 2009-08-05 . chapter 1I liked this. |
 Frogster 2009-08-04 . chapter 1Aw, that was so sweet! I loved the Dasey bits, especially the thing about Derek not picturing his future with any girl other than Casey. I'm such a sucker. And I loved the baby bits too. I'm also hoping the movie has canon!baby, so we can all stop wondering whether it'll be a boy or a girl and what they're going to name it. (Btw, what was the boy's name you picked?)
Great job! Write more soon! |
 Invalid Minds 2009-08-04 . chapter 1“I think it sounds like fun!” “Of course you do,”
LMAO. This is perfect.
“Let’s just say there was an incident involving fake snow and a Santa costume.”
Oh, Edwin.
“What? I’m maturing. Just ask Casey.” “It’s true. He may even volunteer to babysit.” “What has she being doing to you out there in Kingston, bro?”
Pwahahaha!
“Now I know the real reason Derek didn’t want me dating you,” “You told him already?” “I emailed. Couldn’t help it.”
Rofl, win.
“Nah, I think he’ll be a keener, like you,” “She better not have your Dad’s musical ability.”
I really, really wanna see a drabble with Derek and pregnant!Casey arguing over the gender of their baby, now. It would be just as cute, if not cuter, as them arguing/betting over the Geora baby.
“This is a hospital, not a hotel. Run along,”
LMAO.
“You know saying my name like that just makes me want to kiss you more,”
I'll never be able to hear Casey going "DER-EK!" again without thinking of this.
Girl, wai so awesome? You even cleared up the Derek PDA thing. I bet he wouldn't be able to keep his hands off her. teehee.
“So, about that hotel room…”
Pwahaha!
“My very presence can make you smile like that, huh?” “You know I’m in trouble if you ever leave me.” “Never.”
omg. they're so cute. *hyperventilates*
"He ran a hand through my hair possessively."
Guh...
OMG. GIRL, NO FRICKING WAY. Amelia is the middle name I give Casey. Which I haven't posted anywhere I don't think. We are so sharpies. I love the name Amelia. HIGH FIVE.
"He nuzzled my neck"
That's the cutest mental image I've had all day.
“Don’t cry, Nora, seriously, please stop.”
Oh, Derek.
I think this is the longest review I've ever left for a oneshot. It was just so cute! I loved! It had feel good family moments /and/ Dasey. Aww.
~Jo |
 JaneyWrenDC 2009-08-04 . chapter 1Aw I loved it.
You are a truly excellent writer and I have to say that you write Dasey better than anyone I know. I LOVED Hockey Girl's and this one shot was just as brilliant. I really hope you write some more sequels soon for everyone to enjoy. It would be really good if you wrote one about Casey and Derek babysitting and them losing the baby lol.
Excellent story, 10/10 :) |
 Joseph Santiago 2009-08-03 . chapter 2Great fic!
Has the movie really been confirmed or is this just wishful thinking? |
 wprincessannw 2009-08-03 . chapter 2ah very cute :)
I love ur writing!! |
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