Rather sad... But good. Definetly.

Mr Pride, this particular work of yours is simply quite wonderful. I especially enjoyed the parts featuring the delightful Ms Haruko. I think you did a excellent job staying true to her character. I hope to read more of your work soon, and if the urge strikes you, please don't hesitate to write more fiction with this pairing. Your devoted fan -Sam-

very well written.
i like it!