great story! can't wait to see what happens especially between syd & vaughn! plz update soon!

One of the best Alias fanfiction out there. It's pity that your update has been so long. Your changes were realistic believable and heartwarming. The way you kept the story going was superb and the way they found out about each other... wow. Anyway I REALLY hope you write more soon. Inform me when you post again, please. :) Hehe.

I could protest that Vaughn was never special ops and that he could tell his friends and family that he works for the CIA (this was referred to when Sydney was planning to go out of being a double agent before the end of season I) but let's just argue that this is after all an Alternate Universe.

I love the way you've written this. :) This has got to be one of the best Alias Fics out there. :) Keep on writing. :)

*reader happily wails in delight upon finishing*

that was so GOOD! i cannot believe how awesome that fic was. i love the quotes 'spoil you rotten' and 'not just any cheese. it was green' and 'the onion bagel is best'. you're such an amazing writer, please, get chapter 10 up as soon as possible. there's not much i can criticize... besides a few sentences which were full of typos, and were rendered rather incoherent, but find a good beta reader and you'll be done with that. your portrayal of syd the brave and vaughn the sexy is just SPOT ON! i love the characters' actions and all the tie-ins with france and hockey, it made it all the more real. i think your chpater titles were creative and on another very trivial note, your ID and email are very appropriately funky to your writing personality, i like them.

please please please write chapter 10 and finish this fic ASAP-

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Thank you! Finally an Alias that isn't Sydney/Vaughn. Good work!

I rarely post comments, but wanted to let you know that I have enjoyed your story. Hope you finish it one day!

yes, hello? you there? i think saturday has come and gone. is ch 10 still in the works? i'm about ready to stage a revolt or a roit or a mutiny or whatever. so just a warning! keep it coming! hehe.

Great story so far, Pinkpeaches! I can't wait to read more. Speaking of which, it's been at least two-three Saturdays since you said that you would upload the next chapter, so here I am, being a good reader.

Really Good. Write more! I wan to knoe what happens... Does hse beocme a double agent? That wqouls be so cool. I don't really understand how Danny died though... Well it was really good anyway and I hope you write another chapter ...

Just wanted to say I love this story.

The last chap thru me for a loop, who would have thought they knew each other? Loved the twist.

Cant wait for the next chap

Amera

woah! this is good! nice job, and keep up the suspense! write more soon!

I love this story! Please post the next chapter soon! Your writing is wonderful.

Great chapter! It's a little hard to believe that she wouldn't recognize Vaughn, or Noelle...but I'll go along with it. :) Excellent descriptions, you did an amazing job with their emotions. Good job!

Woohoo! A new chapter, thank you! I can't wait for the next part. I love this story

Noelle! That my sis's name! _ Just loved that lol...I'm so sorry I never got back to you with comments, my teachers decided to dump a bunch of projects on me at once. But you mentioned that you'd found a beta reader already so that's good. I like this chapter, especially with the expansion on Vaughn's past. Nice job, Lulu! - Nicole