Very nicely written.

Those last few lines were so warm and fuzzy, in contrast with the dreariness of it all. As you can probably tell by my alerts and everything taking up your inbox, I'm on a Janto raid, making my way down your stories. _

D'aw, comforting!Jack is adorable :D

Lucy x

Loving your writing,

loved this fic.

Ah, the ending was very good. very good indeed. Oh yes. That was an amazing ending. You rock my mismatched (I never wear matching ones) socks off!

As a second Torchwood story, I like it, though it was a bit confusing in places, until I figured out when it was happening.

However, the writing you have shown in later stories already shows well here: The whoosh of air, the pair sliding down the wall together, the way Ianto can badger Jack until Jack is forced to answer serious questions seriously, "One tiny glimmer, one tiny crack as Ianto’s calm face fell into disarray for just one infinitesimal moment..."

"Crack in the Facade" was a good title. Used "Facade" myself for a Blake's Seven story here.

Aww, poor Ianto!

x

Love your fan art, btw!

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I really liked how you built up their relationship in this scene. I think a lot remained unanswered after Countrycide and this helped to clear some things up between Jack and Ianto.

Oh, love it. SUch emotion, and such a tantalizing ending...! In true Torchwood style. :)

Fantastic! Aw, my poor broken darling. Yay for Jack seeing and helping.

*Huggles*

Gx