AWWWW :( i hate this lolll.. its like slapping me in the face.. Telling me to move before its to late

MiyuxKanata forever...
Its a sad one,,,,,,,,,,,
but it is really good,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

i absolutely love this story. I saw it a year or two ago on youtube with vermillion 2 by slipknot playing in the background and it was beautiful and had harmony together. I don't know why it got removed. Do you know who posted it?

omg so sad!

*sniffs...

Aww *sniff-sniff* thats the saddest but its is a very cute story but if Kanata told Miyu how he felt then she would return his feelings Good Story (TT)

wow great point of view for kanata, i feel really sad though.

GEEZ! ryoma is still in my head!

aw... that's so sad... but still cute!

huhuhu... its so sweet... both of them hav the same feeling but no one wanna to step forward until the end...

sometimes i think its a foolish act, bt deep down in my heart i know this kind of thing reli happen in the real world...

hopefully i'm not the one... huhuhu

I lov it

Uh huh...

If you were going to go with this plot line, you should have been a little more creative about it, or fleshed it out into a full story.

This... You didn't even stick names in or anything. I hate to leave a blatantly negative review, but this story, if it can even be called so, was primarily a cut and paste type of deal.

You said you wanted to try a sad ending as though it were you who contrived the entire plot. This is not respectable work.

It's borderline plagiarism. If it weren't for the nature of this site, this post would definitely be in poor taste. If i were the type of person who flagged things, I would flag this.

On a technical note, there were far too many ellipsis here. There's nothing wrong with commas and periods. To indicate a change or setting or time in a story, to add less confusion to the transition, center and bold the title.

Well bye then.

who heart wrencher huh hahaha

it shows how you need to precious every moment you spend in the world, enjoying every second until it last. coz we cant never rewind the times we have already spent

really good huh i remember my first love when i didn't say i need him until the end of our highschool

sweet story yet said.. :)

(T-T) that was so sad.. I totally feel your story

Great Job though!

that's so sad... :(

Kanata is ooc, but I still love him anyway.

:]

This is so sweet.

Keep up the good work!