 Hope06 2009-12-24 . chapter 4wow love how the case is progressing I can't wait to read more
you know the characters so well! keep up the amazing work |
 dares to dream 2009-11-03 . chapter 3Whoa creepy ending to this chapter. Haha. Its looking great so far! Keep up the good work!
+dares to dream+ |
 Hope06 2009-11-01 . chapter 3Oh God Lily why did you not listen, why did you have to be so stubborn!
can't wait for the next chapter |
 usaprincess242 2009-09-23 . chapter 2Wow this story is really good. I'm glad u decided to continue. |
 Hope06 2009-09-23 . chapter 2interesting connection defintly different. looking forward to the next chapter |
 Hope06 2009-08-17 . chapter 1Can't wait to read more you write so well you should be a writer for the show |
 usaprincess242 2009-08-14 . chapter 1wow this is great. please continue |
 Chainclaw 2009-08-04 . chapter 1Well I'm interested to see how this turns out. I gotta be honest though, the main thing that has me interested is me wondering if you can pull this off, since all of the Cold Case episodes I've seen involving serial killers have sucked. So I'll be eager to see if you can do better then the actual show. |