wow love how the case is progressing I can't wait to read more

you know the characters so well! keep up the amazing work

Whoa creepy ending to this chapter. Haha. Its looking great so far! Keep up the good work!

+dares to dream+

Oh God Lily why did you not listen, why did you have to be so stubborn!

can't wait for the next chapter

Wow this story is really good. I'm glad u decided to continue.

interesting connection defintly different. looking forward to the next chapter

Can't wait to read more you write so well you should be a writer for the show

wow this is great. please continue

Well I'm interested to see how this turns out. I gotta be honest though, the main thing that has me interested is me wondering if you can pull this off, since all of the Cold Case episodes I've seen involving serial killers have sucked. So I'll be eager to see if you can do better then the actual show.