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xXxhurting-insidexXx 11/3/10 . chapter 5
Awwwwh, this Is Soo Cute!

I got Teary-eyed At the Last Two
Jasmine-Dec31 10/31/10 . chapter 5
What'd he do?
Jasmine-Dec31 10/31/10 . chapter 4
So sweet!
Jasmine-Dec31 10/31/10 . chapter 3
Is this the same one as in ten snuggles?
Jasmine-Dec31 10/31/10 . chapter 2
I've never watched the godfather before
Jasmine-Dec31 10/31/10 . chapter 1
So cute. Love it!
mrssalvatoreDK3 10/1/10 . chapter 5
awww! it's a bit cheesy, and Ash seems a bit out of character, but this is really a fantastic story! i love this couple,and im glad someone made a cute short story with them!

love it! peace
Hannah Bessell 9/22/10 . chapter 1
thats grate! i luved it! i always write stories about ash and mary : ) 3 xo

p.s simler to twilight
Princess Mariana 9/10/10 . chapter 5
:)
Princess Mariana 9/10/10 . chapter 3
They're an adorable couple!
Princess Mariana 9/10/10 . chapter 2
What's with guys and the Godfather? In all the movies and in real life, that the GUY movie it seems...I like the stories :)
Jasmine 5/14/10 . chapter 3
YES! They are very cute! Your stories are also cute! ]
TeamUnderdog 5/12/10 . chapter 5
i love Ash and Mary-Lynnette! these are so cute! you should write more!
Jasmine 4/16/10 . chapter 3
Really cute!
NatalieWeasley 4/10/10 . chapter 5
amazing story

the best part is at the end of #4 when he gos "I know"
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