 xXxhurting-insidexXx 11/3/10 . chapter 5Awwwwh, this Is Soo Cute!
I got Teary-eyed At the Last Two |
 Jasmine-Dec31 10/31/10 . chapter 5What'd he do? |
 Jasmine-Dec31 10/31/10 . chapter 4So sweet! |
 Jasmine-Dec31 10/31/10 . chapter 3Is this the same one as in ten snuggles? |
 Jasmine-Dec31 10/31/10 . chapter 2I've never watched the godfather before |
 Jasmine-Dec31 10/31/10 . chapter 1So cute. Love it! |
 mrssalvatoreDK3 10/1/10 . chapter 5awww! it's a bit cheesy, and Ash seems a bit out of character, but this is really a fantastic story! i love this couple,and im glad someone made a cute short story with them!
love it! peace |
 Hannah Bessell 9/22/10 . chapter 1 thats grate! i luved it! i always write stories about ash and mary : ) 3 xo
p.s simler to twilight |
 Princess Mariana 9/10/10 . chapter 5:) |
 Princess Mariana 9/10/10 . chapter 3They're an adorable couple! |
 Princess Mariana 9/10/10 . chapter 2What's with guys and the Godfather? In all the movies and in real life, that the GUY movie it seems...I like the stories :) |
 Jasmine 5/14/10 . chapter 3 YES! They are very cute! Your stories are also cute! ] |
 TeamUnderdog 5/12/10 . chapter 5i love Ash and Mary-Lynnette! these are so cute! you should write more! |
 Jasmine 4/16/10 . chapter 3 Really cute! |
 NatalieWeasley 4/10/10 . chapter 5amazing story
the best part is at the end of #4 when he gos "I know" |