Awww! This was so sweet and very well written! Great job! This is like a sequel to the movie. I loved all of your details and how you wrote each character! I wish the movie ended like this. This is super good. It was an awesome read! Keep up the awesome writing!

u r awesome

This idea is really good. I just want to start off by saying that. But this is really choppy. It needs some more filling. I really think this could be good. Just put a little bit more into it. I think what would help is not putting the song titles so close together. Listen to each of the songs and imagine what Kate is thinking about each lyric. :) I hope this helps because I think this has a lot of potential.

Thank God I'm not the only one who thinks Kate & John are 100000000x better than Kate & Scott!

lol nice

cute! the dialog was sorta weird, but good.