yay! one-shots! and ArchexChester!
I really loved the subtle romance you put in this story, but in the first chapter, it was kind of confusing to tell who was speaking.
I can't wait for a new chapter! ^-^

How cute~ I love it~ XD They're both so stubborn... Anyway, excellent job~

As for things you need to work on, nothing different than what I said in the other one.

Suzu is super-cute~ And of course, as is the Archesterness~ Wonderful story, and I hope you post up more little one-shots!

Good luck!
~Ayame~@

aw so cute ;]