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Reviews for: The Comfort Woman and the Cardassian Prefect's Chi
QueenOfTheButterflies
2009-12-19 . chapter 4
Awe! I liked it!
sova enari
2009-10-04 . chapter 3
O I like this chapter (not that I didn't like the other chapters). I like the idea of Dukat's son and Garak's daughter being friends too :)
Anamin
2009-09-23 . chapter 2
Dude, don't stop there! LOL!! I'm sucked in already.
Little Tanuki
2009-08-23 . chapter 2
I wonder how this will all turn out. You have an interesting beginning here. A few little tense issues, but nothing too major. eg. "Dukat looks down at Meru" With the rest in past tense, should probably be "looked".

And for Meru's labour, perhaps either -- use less "had". Or you might think about putting it in the next section somewhere, possibly as a brief, two line flash back??

As in,
"Have you thought about what to name him?"
It had taken...

Good stuff. ^_^ L.T.
sova enari
2009-08-13 . chapter 2
Damen? Is it a coincidence that that's the name of the Cardassian in your other story or are they the same person? I really want you to update both of them now!!
One tiny thing: I don't think the Cardassians would treat her nicer because she had a 1/2 Cardassian baby. They would probably think it was disgusting. Update soon!
a dose of reality
2009-08-12 . chapter 1
Please go and google the term "comfort women".
Robert1000
2009-08-11 . chapter 2
great story please update soon
TrekkieBaby
2009-08-04 . chapter 1
This is one of those DUN DUN DUN moments...
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