I consider Ben to be a rockpile, not a rock.

Yea, Harriet defended Ben when the reporter dissed him!

I swear, Mary Sue's should be illegal on

aw poor Harriet, Johnny had better think up something fast...oh yeah you should carry the story on through the silver surfer

hahaha harriet has a little crush on Johnny ^-^ hehe it's awesome! keep up the good wrok *mock sulute*

yayness! we finally see her power! which is pretty cool!
at least it's not super clehe like water/ice, hehe being able to supre excelerate ones molecular structure to move at impossibly fast speeds... ^-^

Omg, super speed?! Yay, thats a cool power! And it matches the name "Rapid-" as in fast and "fire" as in likey Johnny! Nice! More please! *puppy pout*

yayness! they get hit by da cloud ^-^ hey she should get like electricty powers!! that'd be so cool...or able to control technology...but I lke the electricty...haha sorry random rambling ^-^

Nani?! This is cool, so so so cool! *pouts* why is all totally good stories ALWAYS unfinnished and stopping right before all the fun begins?!? -3-
Please please please, update soon! o3o

hm it seems pretty good so far...even though it's only chapter 1...I'm phyic like that...I shall follow this story till I lose interest ^-^ by the way I really hope that Harriet doesn't get a water or ice power, I really hate that clehe...it's so overused!

In the movie, Johnny had short, dark hair.

Stories only need to be double spaced when uploaded to the manager. Once it's in there, you can seperate the paragraphs.