Wow... that was really good. I liked it very much. Also I'm not sure if he left a note or not. did they mention that in the book?

Goodness! I didn't think anyone would have a fanfiction for this book, but there was! This will be the only one I will read though because it seems to have nothing to do with the boy, according to what i gathered from the summary, because i don't want to ruin the image i have of him.

i think this is very good! can't wait to read more.

Cool

You honestly might want to take this up to M, T doesn't seem to fit all the qualifications of what you're putting in this story.

You need some help on grammar, and this should be MUCH longer and more detailed. Not so much the rape part, but about Dusty and her mom's reactions and what's happening round town and stuff.

omigoodness, this is the only fanfiction! that's crazy b/c this book was friggin amazing. neway, nice job :) i liked it

It wasn't an ocean it was a lake. But good idea for an ff