huh, great job. not a fan of the pairing, but you made it more plausible than I thought possible. you have a lot of skill at writing emotions. well done.

This isn't gunna be continued is it? D;
-sob-
I actually like it a ton =D
You should continue it~
I'll pay you XD

And I'm gunna guess that...
Jiraiya said "Orochimaru" when he was hugging Sasuke in the flashback?

I'll feel so dumb if I get it wrong.. or if it's not even close y'know? XDD