Hello!

I like your fic, there are some good ideas. But what I enjoyed the most was the end, and Vegeta's thoughts then : It was a beautiful day today, and tomorrow looked just as promising. I think it suits the scene really well.

Thanks very much for writing this fic!

Hallolo

I like it very much. Some (*poor Veggie*) big angst and funny sides. Well done. Thank you for the good moment.

"M. Trunks took baby Trunks out"
ROFL ROFL xD
That's hilarious and so sweet at the same time.
rofl rofl xD Great Story BTW. :D

SNIFF. so sad. i like it so far though, classic Veggie pride. I REALLY hope you will update soon. I love all your dbz stories so far.
Purplelily

Pretty good chapter =). I noticed quite a few typos throughout the chapter that you should go back and fix as soon as possible, and also, I saw that you used the number, "3." Technically, that's suppose to be written out, "three." Oh well, I'll stop nit picking XD. Keep up the good work. Hope the prince hangs in there.

i like this story a lot :) there are a few noticable grammatical errors, but they werent too bad. well done. hurry and get ch. 3 up!

Not a bad start, its getting intresting.

Hmm, I like the story, very interesting. I'm eager to see what happens next! I wish there was more description, but other than that, it's good =)

you have something good going on here. I wouldn't mind reading this