Okay I want to start off with thank you so much for writing a fanfic that was written well. I couldd tell that you knew your stuff. I usually don't like it when authors make fanfics about Twilight but make it all human because I don't see the point but you did such a good job at this that I'm making an exception! :D

I love the flow of the story and the gradual change we see in Bella- it's not like "Oh, look we have a new Bella that can handle everything" so I think the meeting up with Renee was an important part of the fanfic.

I'm a strong believer in marriage so even though you were going with the way Stephenie Meyer portrayed Bella's view on marriage in the saga it unnerved me to think of them having sex(naive, I know) and doing all these things without getting married. I learned to accept this as the last few chapters continued to play out and I'm sorry that there won't be a marriage in store for your fictional characters. But surprisingly I learned as a person that it's okay for someone to choose that. Thank you, I just learned a life lesson. (:

Okay, continuing. I'm so glad that everyone was like their character as in the saga and that you kept throwing in names previously used like Aro, Jane, Marcus- to name a few. I especially liked how the characters we already knew reappeared but didn't know the people that they know in the saga like Leah and Jacob- interesting pairing and I was almost positive that they already knew eachother from their childhood.

I also really like that when I read it I was reading a completely different story. So the relationships and the difference in characters attitudes wasn't that shocking and it played nicely. The only thing that I really see that you used from the original saga was the names, the couples (excluding Jacob and Leah), and the personalities (not so much with Renee even).

Sorry for the long review but I really appreciate you writing a great story for people like me who need something other than a regular book from time to time. Great story and boy am I glad I read this after it was complete or else I would have gone CRAZY!! :D Thanks once again.

I really enjoyed the story. Not how I would have thought it to end. But if you actually look the situation is was right for this story.

i would just like to say you are without a doubt the best writer on this site, i loved your story.

it was written really well and i enjoyed reading it
it was different from the other stories,it was refreshing
:) x

The story us over officially now... What will I read to calm me to sleep? Hm... Nothing will top this...

I can't believe it's over...just like that...over (eyes fill with tears) ... Over...

M Jacob in an old car. Sounds like a Titanic moment lol... Can't wait ;D

Sounds like an amazing cocktail to me!

Good night and thank you. I loom forward to readin the outtakes tomorrow. As always you are seated in the most esteemed eminence if my nightly ritual. Thank you for you are
never a dissappoinment.

MHM Jacob on his knees. Sounds like a good time to sleep with that on the brain lol. Thanks for the bedtime story!

You know what I really want? A list of all the songs and bands you mention on this story so I can go chck it out. Wanna send me 1?lol

Good morning!

Great chapter! I liked the scene don't be embarrassed I can't write like that at all. Probably because my friends read my stuff and love to comment in the middle of class... :D

Time for sleep now. Thanks for the bedtime story! Never one to disappoint are you? I see the end is near and wonder what I'm goin toread next from you. You better have a killer one in store because I don't think anything will top this...ever. Wanna prove me wrong?

Short...eh...okay... I'm q Jacob fan I guess so don't like him acting like this

Love love love love it!

Your story is helping my procrastination! Thank you honey!!