Found this rec'd on one of my fb pages today & spent the whole day reading it! Very well done..I enjoyed this alot. Love Linda xo

Thank you ever so much for taking the time to write this fic. I just found it and have read it all in one go - it's now gone 2am here! You have a lovely style of writing and your version of the characters was wonderful.

Found this through the Lemonade stand. Great story. Thanks for sharing :)

This has been on my to read list and coincidentially I started reading on September 13!

Really enjoyed reading this story, thanks for sharing.

I can't believe I haven't read this before! So glad I found it now :-)

Bella and Edward's stories are so tragic but this story was still very sweet despite the sadness.

I have loved this story so much.

Your writing is beautiful and intelligent, it was descriptive without being overly so and your characters are all so well developed.

I cried a little when Charlie hugged Bella. It was such a turning point for her, probably (to me anyway) more so than visiting the grave.

Excellent story, thank you so much.

Xx

Edwards POV would be nice

Honestly, I have known about this story for a long time but didn't read it because the summary is so vague. That's a bit of a turn-off for me. However an online friend told me she read it and loved it, so I gave it a shot and I'm glad I did. I would have reviewed through-out the story, but I was reading it at work where I can't access non-work websites. I'm allowed to use my Kindle when it's a slow day. Anyway, good work!

This was a very well-written story and I enjoyed, other than that on chapter, it was really good. I loved the resolutions to Bella's ordeal and was quite thrilled that she and Charlie came to some understanding. It was lovely.

A very satisfying chapter.

I think that was very sweet gesture that Edward did for Bella, for her to havw closure.

I think that was very sweet gesture that Edward did for Bella, for her to havw closure.

Bella is not writing the I am happy they resovled her issue, which should not have been an issue. Lets see if her and Charlie can resolve their issues.

I would have thought somewhere before all this went down there would have been more of a clue as to why she is running from Edward. It just rings false. As I stated previously your writing style is impeccable but this chapter rings false to me and I also noted that you relied on words from New Moon, so I was bit disappointed there. You have such a gift, I wish I could write as beautifully as you do, but even if you justify it in future chapters, it just seems false, and if you have to explain it to us, that is not a good thing, your story should just unfold organically. No author's note should be needed for storytelling, the best stories are those that do not require justification or what is in store for the viewer, it should just unfold and the author notes should be used for recommendations for other stories or to give to certain charities that you will be participating in by writing a specific story for or thanking your commenters for their reviews, not to reveal plot. I apologize for the rant, it is just that I think you are far too good for things like I just mentioned.