This poem has a wonderful simplicity in it's rhythm and irregular cadence. I loved the ending. This entire poem is deeply mournful and so true to Hinata's love for Naruto. It encompasses her entire world.

Wonderful use of metaphor as well. Here's another: Naruto's eyes are the sky, and Hinata's the moon.

Lovely poem :) Instant favorite.

This poe is really deep,and I love it. It holds lots of symbolism and I cant stop reading it again and again!

yes it was mw thank you very much for letting me use your poem

its really beautiful and i think they are going to like it a lot

hi i loved your poem

And i would like to recitate it on my schools contest

the problem is i need to say the author and i dont think they are going to accept Orochimaruismyman as a possibility

if ypu give me ypur permission please let me know