I'm really glad you let the words write themselves instead of forcing the m to be what they are not. You ended up with a very original and unique piece. Thank you! Although i must disagree with you. I don't see this a solem piece, but a sincere piece dipicting Karou's devotion to helping Kenshin. So once more I say Thank You!

Emotional poem.

*sobs* BEAUTIFUL! And the phrase, "I hate the snow." Is very unique and just sounds.. dunno, but I like it .

Wow. I think I'm going to cry T_T I love this, it's incredible - the last line, "To hate the snow" is really. I don't know, poignant. Very, very good. *huggles her little Kenshin plushie and walks off* Keep writing, ne? Ja ne!

Oh my god.

That was incredibly good.

I really like how you captured Kaoru's thoughts.

This is a great poem I think I'll read

more by you sometime!

-Spellcaster.

ohh kool u really got into kaorus character because i think thats the way she see's it

Very nice! :)