Awesome, please write more.

This is a great story it has a unique idea and a well thought out storyline.

YAY! I'm glad you'll be finishing this!

Yay [does special good-fic-update dance] Thank you very muchly for updating ^.^ Good chappy... I'm glad it didn't get rushed though, I hate it when things are all rushed and it gets kinda boring... nothing to anticipate >.> But thanks for updating and I hope ya can update again soon!

Noahs have grayish skin btw.
Great story

I'm going to say this once...

You need to move all japanese translations at the bottom of the page, its annoying as heck to read through...

anyway update soon...

Hmm, I think it'll be easier to read your story if you didn't add in any Japanese words. It somehow disrupts the story when there's translations for the words right after the scene is finished. And it's easier for you to not type all those translations too, but it's your choice(: If you really do want to use the Japanese words, I suggest you add in the translations either at the beginning or the end of the chapter(:

Well, the idea in itself seems really interesting and I really liked the story. It's really, really good, so please, I want you to update it ASAP, even if I'l keft the only one reading it, OK?

update soon please i wanna know what the reaction will be like

AWESOME!
~I was afraid that you'd never update!
Oh I have a few problems.
'~' Too many of these.
The translation should be put at the bottom.

THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!

Please update soon. It's getting good so far. I'm not a boyxboy fan, but I can't help reading yours. It's so interesting!

Please update soon~! =^_^=

Not bad. glad ya could update ^.^ Brothers? [kinda guessed at that] Good so far, keep it up ^.^

I love Lavi! XD "Yu wear a nightgown"

Pls update soon T_T..this story is freakin awesome...so who actually got left behind?Allen or his brother?