Very short, but I'm glad to say that the length does not equal the excellence. I enjoyed reading it!

So much in so few words! Thanks for sharing - it was nicely done!

Araloth

Ah, the bane of so many authors and poets - to use few words to say much. I often find myself using very lengthy passages in both my stories and poems, something that I am working on breaking myself of. But you, my friend, have master this skill beautifully. Here we have 27 words, a very, very small number, where every word counts. This is lovely and, because of of shortness, very dramatic. Way to go!

The only thing that I think would be cool if changed is if instead of using the English word "Farewell" you could use the Elvish "Namarie". It might give it a more Elvish feeling, but it's totally up to you. With or without it, you have a great work of art here. I'm looking forward to reviewing some of your stories.

-Sauron Gorthaur