Aww, that was sweet... I've never thought Blossom would be into bad boys though :3.

I wish I saw this earlier, but I've been away from my computer for a few days. It's good to see some new stuff from you ^_^.

That was good. Very good. I've never even thought of this pair. It's interesting, really.

Good job!

ace and bloss huh very interesting pair
i liked it =) you should write another chap ;)

I like how you've nailed Ace's speech patterns. I find it difficult to nail the way people speak and always appreciate when it's done well. Also I love your idea of what Blossom and Ace do when they've gotten older. I never expected the Gangreen Gang to stay together for very long...and Blossom working as a cop is a great.

I can't honestly find any bad things in this story. You have a great, straight-forward style of writing. I enjoyed this alot. Good job! ^^