Holy sushi!!
That was uhm.. wow.
I wouldve never ever imagined Mello.. well, I could. But not to Matt!! XDD
I feel so sorry for Matt now <3
Hmm, i'm not flaming you, but think about this. You might wanna make something as big as abuse really elaborate and detailed. Which is.. make the chapters longer. Everything seems to just rush by me and I get a bit lost.
Positive feedback time! I've NEVER read anything like this, so please please update soon.

aw i don't want to ruin it! this was sad and scary and AMAZING... update... like now. :-D