aw man i wish you hadn't stopped there! this was an amazing story! you got the characters just right :] please write more!

Pls dont finish it of here...continue!

aw...sweet :)

just a minor thing; I think that this story is a bit explicit for the K rating; it could pass for T, but not K.

besides that, I really loved it.

I love it! I wish this would happen in the show. Does it?

Aw! That was amazing! I wish this is how the episode turned out. Ruby and Jordan are perfect for each other, and you captured each of their feelings perfectly!

haha cute.

i loved it[;

That was awesome. Really well written.

awesome story! you have to continue it! awesome 5 of 5!

Wow...

I swear, if that happened on the actual show, I would die! I'm really hoping they won't turn out to be related *crosses fingers*

Please write more!

Love it!

How cute. I love the ending, how perfect. (I'm horrible at writing reviews...)

I lovelovelove this! Awesome writing.

That was just all forms of awesome. Thanks for this piece. I am addicted to the show already. I hope this was real lol.

omg. thank you! ever since the show aired I've been waiting for somebody to write a fanfic for this! and you did :) oh and great story its cutee especially the part when they walk in on them kissing that was funny keep up the good work. -natalie