Aaaah, this is so wonderful! I adore the way you write all the characters - really unique and so entertaining!

I really like your stories. They're easy to read and therefore are fun to read as well. I would add more to this review, but I've pretty much stated all that is needed. Keep it up!

It seems that you are making Marshal your new Palmer, if you realize what I am saying...

How old is everyone in your story?

I can honestly say your FanFiction is by far the funniest I have ever read. Whenever I'm feeling down all I have to do is read this FanFic and I can get a smile back on my face again.

Oh, yeah, and I'm you 101st comment! Woot!

This comment is the and of moi.

From what I can see, Marshal is the only elite four member that hasn't really embrassed Caitlin...

I have another idea. Truth or dare. Nothing more should need be said.

Awesome chapter. It is a curious notion as to what the Elite Four/Frontier Brains do when there's no challengers around. Probably get bored out of their skulls and perhaps stuff like this occurs. Hehe.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

I have an idea for a story, and if you dont want to do it, I'm fine with that.

Have a 5 man vs 5 man pokemon battle between the Unova elites and the frontier brains ( Caitlin versus Darach, cough cough).

Very good. I don't think that you involved Darach enough, though. Also, are all the rest of the stories going to have Caitlin be in the elite four, or is the story having a varied timeline?

I'm pretty sure that this is one of the best things I've seen all day .Yep, it is.

All of these chapters had me almost rolling off my bed in laughter. It's so...random and yet, totally sane(maybe no so much), all wrapped in into one tiny little box.

Anyway, Dahlia is my favorite, followed by Palmer. I swear I'll never look at them the same way again on my Platinum. I hope you do more with the other leaders, like the Hoenn Brains (why does it seem like Brandon, Palmer, and Noland would have a drinking contest?), because your characterizations of them are very, very funny.

As for a request, I would love to see a Christmas themed episode; maybe they're decorating the Facilities and Palmer's Rhyperior eats a strand of lights and Dahlia gorges on Christmas candies. Just a couple of ideas.

Anywhos, I love this series and this is definitely going into favorites.

Gwen

Why you ask? Well your dorkiness coincides well with your storymaking thats why. Its what we, the fans love about your stories...Well its what I love, I can't speak foreveryone else.

Lol,I remember them last I saw they were Black Serperior for me,and I bet ,N and Reshiram feel like killing Grimsley for the "fluffy crotch plumage" comment:)

HAHAHAHHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!

- Sweet piplups on a stick

- Disturbed Musharna

- sexy legs

- purple leotard

- Caitlin adopted.

Delicious, as usual.